The Moon

The world is enveloped in moonlight.A poetic feeling arises and softness pervades the atmosphere.At this time, a breeze often accompanies the silvery light of the moon and gives the world a peculiar appearance and the people a peculiar feeling.The air is suffused with a sweet scent, driving away the ugliness and squalor of the daytime, soothing the distressed and wretched souls.If you sing a song, your voice will reach the clouds.If you read a poem, it will echo in the mountains and valleys far away.If you hum a lullaby, its rhythm will send the whole sleepless city to dreams.

简评

本文描写了月光下的都市沉浸在一片安宁与恬静中。不再有眩目的阳光，一阵清风伴随着银色的月光，空气中弥漫着丝丝芳香。月光驱散了白天的一切丑陋和肮脏，抚慰着痛苦和不幸的人们。最后三个句子结构并列，意义递进，以唱歌或吟诗作比，表现出月夜的宁静。

本文侧重于对感觉的描写，包括具体的和抽象的，充满了想像力。读来像一首优美的诗歌，在写景的同时表达了作者对社会现实的思考，对安宁生活的向往。

（点评教师：黄莺）

姓名：张健

学号：99 1 905 1